From 76b9c1943d91dd101452f4e77c8cb61de8c4f63c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Kevin Sullivan Date: Fri, 8 Feb 2019 21:07:59 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 1/4] Proofreading --- i18n/en/cycle-day.js | 6 +++--- i18n/en/labels.js | 2 +- i18n/en/settings.js | 2 +- i18n/en/symptom-info.js | 26 +++++++++++++------------- 4 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) diff --git a/i18n/en/cycle-day.js b/i18n/en/cycle-day.js index 886e6aa..afbd957 100644 --- a/i18n/en/cycle-day.js +++ b/i18n/en/cycle-day.js @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ export const cervix = { }, firmness: { categories: ['hard', 'soft'], - explainer: "When it's hard it might feel like the tip of your nose" + explainer: "When it's hard, it might feel like the tip of your nose" }, position: { categories: ['low', 'medium', 'high'], @@ -126,9 +126,9 @@ export const noteExplainer = "Anything you want to add for the day?" export const sharedDialogs = { cancel: 'Cancel', areYouSureTitle: 'Are you sure?', - areYouSureToUnset: 'Are you sure you want to unset all entered data?', + areYouSureToUnset: 'Are you sure you want to delete this entry?', reallyUnsetData: 'Yes, I am sure', save: 'Save', - unset: 'Unset', + unset: 'Delete', disabledInfo: 'There is some data missing' } diff --git a/i18n/en/labels.js b/i18n/en/labels.js index 3324c7d..c8b7458 100644 --- a/i18n/en/labels.js +++ b/i18n/en/labels.js @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ export const menuTitles = { export const stats = { cycleLengthTitle: 'Cycle length', cycleLengthExplainer: 'Basic statistics about the length of your cycles.', - emptyStats: 'At least one completed cycle is needed to present you with stats here.', + emptyStats: 'At least one completed cycle is needed to display stats.', //oneCycleStats: (number) => `You have documented one cycle of ${number} days.`, oneCycleStats: 'You have documented one cycle of', daysLabel: 'days', diff --git a/i18n/en/settings.js b/i18n/en/settings.js index dcabf61..d6525ed 100644 --- a/i18n/en/settings.js +++ b/i18n/en/settings.js @@ -122,6 +122,6 @@ You can contact us by bloodyhealth@mailbox.org.` }, credits: { title: 'Credits', - note: 'Thanks and lots of <3 to all of our contributors, as well as, and especially, Susanne Umscheid for the wonderful visual and logo design, and Paula Härtel for the symptom icons' + note: 'Thanks and lots of <3 to all of our contributors, as well as, and especially, Susanne Umscheid for the wonderful visual and logo design, and Paula Härtel for the symptom icons' } } diff --git a/i18n/en/symptom-info.js b/i18n/en/symptom-info.js index 8861325..d05175c 100644 --- a/i18n/en/symptom-info.js +++ b/i18n/en/symptom-info.js @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ export const generalInfo = { nfpTfyReminder: `Drip makes period predictions for you and helps you apply NFP fertility awareness rules. But please remember that this app is made by humans, and humans make mistakes. Always think for yourself: "Does this make sense?" Remember, you don't need an app to understand your cycle! However, drip wants to support you and make period tracking easier, more transparent and secure. Please find more info on the sympto-thermal method in our ${links.wiki.url}.`, - noNfpSymptom: `The app allows you to track this symptom for your mere information, it is not taken into account for any calculation. On the chart you can check how often you track this symptom.` + noNfpSymptom: `The app allows you to track this symptom for your information, it is not taken into account for any calculation. On the chart you can check how often you track this symptom.` } export default { @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ export default { After tracking at least 3 menstrual cycles, drip will give you an overview of · how long your cycles last on average (in "stats"), -· whether the length of your last cycles vary a lot (in "stats" and in bleeding predictions) +· whether the length of your cycles varied significantly (in "stats" and in bleeding predictions) · and predict your next 3 cycles with a range of 3 or 5 days (on home screen and "calendar"). The app allows you to track different intensities of bleeding. On the chart and on the calendar, bleeding values are colored in different shades of red. The darker, the more intense your bleeding. Every bleeding value that is not excluded is taken into account for fertility calculation and prediction for the start of next cycles. @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ By default, the secondary symptom the app uses for NFP evaluation is cervical mu the app helps you identify in which phase of your cycle you are. · How to identify a fertile cervix? -When your cervix is rather open and feels soft like your earlobes, in contrast to an infertile cervix that feels rather closed and hard, like the tip of your nose. If the cervix feels anything but closed and hard, drip takes it as a sign of fertility. On the chart, a fertile cervix is colored in dark yellow, and infertile cervix is colored in light yellow. +A fertile cervix is open and feels soft like your earlobes. In contrast, an infertile cervix feels closed and hard, like the tip of your nose. If the cervix feels anything other than closed and hard, drip takes it as a sign of fertility. On the chart, a fertile cervix is colored in dark yellow, and infertile cervix is colored in light yellow. ${generalInfo.chartNfp} @@ -85,14 +85,14 @@ By default the secondary symptom the app uses for NFP evaluation is cervical muc the app helps you identify in which phase of your cycle you are. · How to identify fertile cervical mucus? -Tracking the feeling and the texture of your cervical mucus on a daily basis helps you identify changes of the quality of the cervical mucus. The values you enter for both feeling and texture of your cervical mucus are combined by drip into one of five NFP-conforming values, from least to most fertile: -· t (= dry feeling + no texture), -· ∅ (= no feeling + no texture), -· f (= wet feeling + no texture), -· S (= no OR wet feeling + creamy texture), -· and S+ (= any feeling + egg white texture OR slippery feeling + any texture). +Tracking the feeling and the texture of your cervical mucus on a daily basis helps you identify changes of the quality of the cervical mucus. The values you enter for both feeling and texture of your cervical mucus are combined by drip into one of five NFP-conforming values. From least to most fertile: +· t = (dry feeling + no texture), +· ∅ = (no feeling + no texture), +· f = (wet feeling + no texture), +· S = (no OR wet feeling + creamy texture), +· S+ = (any feeling + egg white texture) OR (slippery feeling + any texture). -On the chart, fertile mucus is colored in dark blue, and infertile mucus values are colored in lighter shades of blue. +On the chart, fertile mucus is colored in dark blue, and infertile mucus is colored in lighter shades of blue. Please note that drip does not yet support "parenthesis values": According to NFP rules, you can qualify a mucus value by putting parentheses around it, to indicate that it doesn't fully meet the descriptors of one of the five categories, and instead is in between. This functionality will be supported in the future. @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ ${generalInfo.nfpTfyReminder}` }, note: { title: 'Notes', - text: `Note allows you to track any extra information you want to save here. It is the only category that can store information for a date in the future. This can be helpful e.g. for reminding you of an appointment. + text: `Note allows you to track any extra information you want to save. It is the only category that can store information for a date in the future. This can be helpful for reminding you of an appointment. ${generalInfo.noNfpSymptom} @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ ${generalInfo.curiousNfp}` }, sex: { title: 'Tracking sex and contraceptives', - text: `The app allows you to track sex independently from sexual desire. You can differentiate between masturbation and sex with a partner/partners. Here you can also track your contraceptive method(s). Only sexual activity will be shown in the "chart" section, lighter purple indicating solo sex and darker purple partner sex. Did you know that having an orgasm can help release cramps? + text: `The app allows you to track sex independently from sexual desire. You can differentiate between masturbation and sex with a partner(s). Here you can also track your contraceptive method(s). Only sexual activity will be shown in the "chart" section, lighter purple indicating solo sex and darker purple partner sex. Did you know that having an orgasm can help release cramps? ${generalInfo.noNfpSymptom} @@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ It's your temperature after lying still for at least 6 hours. For many, this is The thermometer must indicate 2 decimal places. · How to measure? -You can either measure rectally, vaginally or orally. If you chose rectal or vaginal measurement, you need to measure for at least 3 minutes. If you chose oral measurement, you should measure for at least 5 minutes. Pick one way and stick to it. +You can measure rectally, vaginally or orally. If you chose rectal or vaginal measurement, you need to measure for at least 3 minutes. If you chose oral measurement, you should measure for at least 5 minutes. Pick one way and stick to it. ${generalInfo.chartNfp} From bca86f399681ae77a57e2b71eb91e6384f86ea3d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: emelko Date: Wed, 13 Feb 2019 16:37:33 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 2/4] Renames unset to delete --- components/cycle-day/symptoms/action-button-footer.js | 6 +++--- i18n/en/cycle-day.js | 6 +++--- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/components/cycle-day/symptoms/action-button-footer.js b/components/cycle-day/symptoms/action-button-footer.js index 5f666e9..cd89fe9 100644 --- a/components/cycle-day/symptoms/action-button-footer.js +++ b/components/cycle-day/symptoms/action-button-footer.js @@ -22,16 +22,16 @@ export default class ActionButtonFooter extends Component { const navigateToOverView = () => navigate('CycleDay', {date}) const buttons = [ { - title: labels.unset, + title: labels.delete, action: () => { Alert.alert( labels.areYouSureTitle, - labels.areYouSureToUnset, + labels.areYouSureToDelete, [{ text: labels.cancel, style: 'cancel' }, { - text: labels.reallyUnsetData, + text: labels.reallyDeleteData, onPress: () => { saveSymptom(symptom, date) navigateToOverView() diff --git a/i18n/en/cycle-day.js b/i18n/en/cycle-day.js index afbd957..79b8a0e 100644 --- a/i18n/en/cycle-day.js +++ b/i18n/en/cycle-day.js @@ -126,9 +126,9 @@ export const noteExplainer = "Anything you want to add for the day?" export const sharedDialogs = { cancel: 'Cancel', areYouSureTitle: 'Are you sure?', - areYouSureToUnset: 'Are you sure you want to delete this entry?', - reallyUnsetData: 'Yes, I am sure', + areYouSureToDelete: 'Are you sure you want to delete this entry?', + reallyDeleteData: 'Yes, I am sure', save: 'Save', - unset: 'Delete', + delete: 'Delete', disabledInfo: 'There is some data missing' } From 68ddd4674a56b09b86f98b2542cff1c0e3d46fe2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: emelko Date: Wed, 13 Feb 2019 16:45:27 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 3/4] Further feedback on proofreading --- i18n/en/symptom-info.js | 7 ++++--- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/i18n/en/symptom-info.js b/i18n/en/symptom-info.js index d05175c..abb665f 100644 --- a/i18n/en/symptom-info.js +++ b/i18n/en/symptom-info.js @@ -85,14 +85,15 @@ By default the secondary symptom the app uses for NFP evaluation is cervical muc the app helps you identify in which phase of your cycle you are. · How to identify fertile cervical mucus? -Tracking the feeling and the texture of your cervical mucus on a daily basis helps you identify changes of the quality of the cervical mucus. The values you enter for both feeling and texture of your cervical mucus are combined by drip into one of five NFP-conforming values. From least to most fertile: +Tracking the feeling and the texture of your cervical mucus on a daily basis helps you identify changes of the quality of the cervical mucus. The values you enter for both feeling and texture of your cervical mucus are combined by drip into one of five NFP-conforming values. +From lowest to best quality: · t = (dry feeling + no texture), · ∅ = (no feeling + no texture), · f = (wet feeling + no texture), · S = (no OR wet feeling + creamy texture), · S+ = (any feeling + egg white texture) OR (slippery feeling + any texture). -On the chart, fertile mucus is colored in dark blue, and infertile mucus is colored in lighter shades of blue. +On the chart, mucus is colored in blue: the darker the shade of blue the better the quality of your mucus. Please note that drip does not yet support "parenthesis values": According to NFP rules, you can qualify a mucus value by putting parentheses around it, to indicate that it doesn't fully meet the descriptors of one of the five categories, and instead is in between. This functionality will be supported in the future. @@ -122,7 +123,7 @@ ${generalInfo.curiousNfp}` }, sex: { title: 'Tracking sex and contraceptives', - text: `The app allows you to track sex independently from sexual desire. You can differentiate between masturbation and sex with a partner(s). Here you can also track your contraceptive method(s). Only sexual activity will be shown in the "chart" section, lighter purple indicating solo sex and darker purple partner sex. Did you know that having an orgasm can help release cramps? + text: `The app allows you to track sex independently from sexual desire. You can differentiate between masturbation and sex with a partner/partners. Here you can also track your contraceptive method(s). Only sexual activity will be shown in the "chart" section, lighter purple indicating solo sex and darker purple partner sex. Did you know that having an orgasm can help release cramps? ${generalInfo.noNfpSymptom} From 7562dfb79e291d7efdc9f424cff639d9bbecb2a9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: emelko Date: Fri, 15 Feb 2019 11:13:42 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 4/4] small change in thank yous --- i18n/en/settings.js | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/i18n/en/settings.js b/i18n/en/settings.js index d6525ed..7431693 100644 --- a/i18n/en/settings.js +++ b/i18n/en/settings.js @@ -122,6 +122,6 @@ You can contact us by bloodyhealth@mailbox.org.` }, credits: { title: 'Credits', - note: 'Thanks and lots of <3 to all of our contributors, as well as, and especially, Susanne Umscheid for the wonderful visual and logo design, and Paula Härtel for the symptom icons' + note: 'Thanks and lots of <3 to all of our contributors as well as Susanne Umscheid for the wonderful design, and Paula Härtel for the symptom icons.' } }